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A Long, Long Holiday short review
This is hands down one of the best shows that I have ever seen.  It's interesting and mature story appeals to both children and adults.
But I shouldn't get too far ahead of myself, should I? Welcome to my review of A Long, Long Holiday 
A Long, Long Holiday is a children's miniseries from France about a group of children, two of whom are on holiday, who are trapped in their village due to the Nazi occupation of France and they are forced to grow beyond their years while they fight to defend their home. 
I found this show while scrolling through Netflix and when I read that it was about young people under Nazi occupation in France, I was immediately hooked. 
Let there be no mistake, this may look like a kid's show, but some parts of this show deal with tough subjects and people do die in this show.  Not often, but it does happen. 
I like how they tackled this WWII setting. Instead of focusing it around seasoned Resistance fighters, they focus it around a gr
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Peace on Earth review
Hello and Merry Christmas or whatever holiday you are celebrating. Here is something special for Christmas. Here it is. 
This, my friends, is my review of a 1939 propaganda cartoon called 'Peace on Earth'. This cartoon is by far one of the more depressing things that I have seen. 
What is the story?
It starts out with two squirrels in bed. Their grandfather comes to visit. They ask the grandfather why there are no men around. (By the way, that's me quoting them. They say 'men'. Not the gender neutral 'man). Anyway, the grandfather explains in graphic detail that every human being on Earth was exterminated by their own hand as the result of a terrible war.  After the human race vanished, the animals came out of hiding and discovered a Bible. They use the ruins of war to build their homes. (If you look closely, you'll notice that they use helmets as their homes). 
If you think that's short, keep in mind. This cartoon is only nine minutes long.
I think this cartoon is
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Why the Force Unleashed Sucks (Story-Wise)
Okay, people. I've said it once and I'll say it again. I love the Force Unleashed, but over the last couple of days, I've been poking more holes into the story of The Force Unleashed, think of these like the hole leading to the reactor core of the Death Star. I've realized that the story doesn't have a leg to stand on.  SO let's get down to it, huh? (By the way, I'm talking about the console version. Not the PSP, Wii or PC versions.
1. You're never given a reason to care about the main character 
So in the first game, you play as Starkiller (I will not be using the name Galen Marek), the secret apprentice of Darth Vader's apprentice, stolen from his family on Kashyyyk. and that's literally all we know about him (game-wise. I'll get to that in a second). You're never ever given a reason to spare a thought for Starkiller. All you know about him is that he is Darth Vader's secret apprentice and that he gets stabbed in the back twice (the first one, literally).  Why should w
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The Lion Guard 'Lions of the Outlands' review.
I am back to talk about the Lion Guard, the only show that I watch on Disney Junior. It's good to know that this show is becoming more popular amongst the TLK fanbase, a few detractors aside. 
Before I begin, I will say this. Yes, I have seen the Lion King II: Simba's Pride. It was a good movie and I will admit I was a little excited when I saw the title of today's episode. 
Let's start, shall we? 
SPOILERS!!!!!
The episode starts out with Bunga and Kion playing Baobab Ball. Their game is interrupted by Jasiri, Kion's hyena friend from the Outlands (not to mention a common shipmate in Lion Guard fanfics). Jasiri tells Kion that her family has been chased out of their watering hole by a group of lions. Kion is confused by this, since there shouldn't be any lions in the Outlands, but he agrees to investigate. (I will get back to this in a minute). He tells Bunga to go back to the lair and tell the rest. However, Bunga gets distracted and referees a race between Fuli
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SW: A Final Call for Help
This is CT-7567, transmitting from the last known uninfected Republic outpost. 
If you are hearing this, I have most likely been killed in action or infected with the Geonosian zombie worms. Either way, I regret to report that the entire Republic has fallen to this disease. The same fate has befallen the Separatist Alliance. 
I am making this tranmission as a call for help and a warning. If you are hearing this and uninfected, do not attempt to rescue me. Instead, find other survivors, supplies and a cure to this virus. i am deep within Geonosian territory, so I repeat, do not attempt to rescue me. 
if you do hear this, do not risk your individuality by venturing to Geonosis, Coruscant, Naboo, Raxus or planets with large cities. They are most likely infected with no survivors. 
Before their planet was infected, Kaminoan scientists discovered that the worms cannot withstand cold temperatures. With that mind, seek refuge on cold planets such as Hoth or Orto Plutonia.&
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The White Ghost: SHADOWNET SESSION #3
(The user, using the handle 'RealWhiteGhost' comes across a page belonging to the Grand Army of Justice. The page banner is a bloodied Republic logo with the Aurebresh slogan "They shall never be forgotten", 
(The user then clicks onto a section on the banner which reads 'CHAT'. The user then clicks onto 'CHAT WITH ADMINISTRATOR)
(The chat begins) 
Admin: Hello, who is this? 
RealWhiteGhost: What the karking hell was that!? 
Admin: I don't know what you are talking about. 
RealWhiteGhost: Really? A attack on a Imperial prison transport in broad daylight, massacaring dozens of possibly innocent men? USING MY NAME AS AN EXCUSE!? Who the hell do you think you are? 
Admin: In the event that this is the real White Ghost, I would like to say that we were following your example. 
RealWhiteGhost: Don't you dare say that rubbish. My goal is the eradication of all corruption on Coruscant. Your goal seems to be to cause chaos. I would never have committed such a
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The White Ghost: HOLONET BROADCAST #3
A transit from the Imperial Judiciary Detention Centre to the Imperial High Court was interrupted today when a group of criminals wearing old Clone Wars Phase I clone armour attacked the transport. 
The transport, containing feared crime lord Faray Hedal, was violently attacked by means of a explosive devices hidden in a traffic buoy. Criminals making use of jetpacks then boarded the transport and committed a massacre of those onboard using Clone Wars era-DC-15 blaster rifles.  These criminals then engaged responding jetroopers in a blaster battle while making their getaway in a speeder. Out of nineteen detainees on the transport, only three survived. Law enforcement losses, as of now, stand at twenty. 
The ISB Director has made a statement. 
"These barbarous acts against possibly-innocent men are no doubt inspired by the activities of the criminal known as the White Ghost. We are currently deciding whether or not the White Ghost should be regarded as a terrorist ma
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Ezra Bridger is NOT Snoke
Hello, boys and girls. Ever since people saw The Force Awakens like myself, we have wondered who the sinister and mysterious Supreme Leader Snoke could be. Dozens of theories have been spun such as Snoke being Darth Plageius or as we will talk about today, Ezra Bridger from Star Wars Rebels being Snoke. 
To me, this idea has never made sense to me and here are my reasons why: 
1. The ages don't match up. 
When you look at Snoke in The Force Awakens, he looks to be in his 70s, 80s, or even 90s. In other words, he looks elderly. Well, I did a little math adding up the amount of years between Rebels, the original trilogy movies and The Force Awakens. It doesn't match up. Ezra Bridger would be in his 40s-50s in Episode VII (assuming he survives Rebels, that is). Yes, you can say dark side degradation, but you need to deeply embrace the dark side in order for that to happen which leads into my second point. 
2. Ezra's morals would not let that happen. 
Regardless on
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The White Ghost: STORMTROOPER RAID
A notice comes up: "Verify your location and enter pass phrase" 
Enters: Level 1313. "Palpatine will die in pain". 
Another notice comes up: "This Holosite contains extreme adult content. As such, you need to verify your age" 
Enters: "24" 
A message comes up: "Welcome to the ShadowNet, the only news network willing to stand up to the tyranny of the Empire" 
The user is directed to a page whose banner has the choices of "TIPS" "ARCHIVED NEWS" "DECLARATION OF EDITORIAL INDEPENDENCE FROM THE EMPEROR" and "ONGOING NEWS" and "FORUM" 
The user selects "Forum" 
The user scrolls and selects a page called "White Ghost fanclub"
(Logs into account "TheRepublicGaveMeASandwhich") 
(Sees a section of the forum labelled 'BREAKING NEWS')
(TheRepublicGaveMeASandwhich clicks onto it)
(The new section has a thread that says "WHITE GHOST ON SHADOWNET!?" which the user clicks on)
(The thread opens)
Unconfirmed reports state that the White Ghost has opened a official
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INTERACTIVE STORY: STAR WARS: STUDENT OF THE FORCE
You are a student in Luke Skywalker's Jedi Academy, somewhere just outside of New Republic space. 
While your comrades are asleep, you decide to forgo sleep for the night and go to the Archives to study, taking your practice saber with you, just in case someone broke into the Academy looking for a quick score. 
The Archives are huge, perhaps owing to the fact that this was a Jedi Academy that no one, not even the First Order, knew about, except for Master Skywalker. This academy was thousands of years old, dating back to the Old Republic era. "Back when there was a galaxy full of Jedi", you mused, being a student of not just the Force, but history. 
You ask the ancient droid that oversaw the Archives for a holodisc regarding the Great Scourge of Malachor, an ancient event that you have been curious about. The droid warns you that it is not appropriate for apprentices, but you just use the Force to cause holodiscs to fall, just to play a prank on him. 
You insert you
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The White Ghost: IMPERIAL HOLONET BROADCAST #2
The Imperial Security Bureau has officially branded the latest video of the White Ghost as a hoax. 
The video, which supposedly depicts the renegade in combat with another lightsaber wielder, was uploaded last week on the illegal, criminal-infested 'ShadowNet'. The uploader has since been arrested and the R2 unit who supposedly taped the event has been destroyed. 
"This video is a hoax. The Empire does not employ the services of the so-called 'Jedi hunter' seen in the video. Our experts have determiend it to be actors who have thrown their freedoms away in a effort to support the illegal efforts of the so-called 'White Ghost'", 
This news comes on the heels of the ISB's finding that the renegade is not a Jedi, but is instead a criminal using a lightsaber. 
"The ISB has several experts in it's employ who have seen the renegade in action. This individual is not a Jedi and he is not to be glorified as one. There have been no records of him attending any sites associate
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The White Ghost: SHADOWNET SESSION #2
A week after the Black Sun hideout raid...
"Clicks onto Shadownet logo. It is a R2 unit painted black" 
A notice comes up: "Verify your location and enter pass phrase" 
Enters: Spider Arms Hostel. "Naboo embraces me". 
Another notice comes up: "This Holosite contains extreme adult content. As such, you need to verify your age" 
Enters: "45" 
A message comes up: "Welcome to the ShadowNet, the only news network willing to stand up to the tyranny of the Empire" 
The user is directed to a page whose banner has the choices of "TIPS" "ARCHIVED NEWS" "DECLARATION OF EDITORIAL INDEPENDENCE FROM THE EMPEROR" and "ONGOING NEWS" and the newly added "FORUM". 
(Clicks onto "FORUM") 
(Clicks "White Ghost fanclub") 
(Enters account: PalpatineDidTheCloneWars
(Begins typing) 
You guys won't believe what I just saw. 
(Someone comments) 
What happened? 
(Similar replies pop up) 
(PalpatineDidTheCloneWars begins typing) 
Two nights
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The White Ghost: SHADOWNET SESSION #1
"Clicks onto Shadownet logo. It is a R2 unit painted black" 
A notice comes up: "Verify your location and enter pass phrase" 
Enters: Spider Arms Hostel. "Naboo embraces me". 
Another notice comes up: "This Holosite contains extreme adult content. As such, you need to verify your age" 
Enters: "45" 
A message comes up: "Welcome to the ShadowNet, the only news network willing to stand up to the tyranny of the Empire" 
The user is directed to a page whose banner has the choices of "TIPS" "ARCHIVED NEWS" "DECLARATION OF EDITORIAL INDEPENDENCE FROM THE EMPEROR" and "ONGOING NEWS" 
The user selects "Ongoing news" 
The user scrolls and selects a page called "White Ghost sightings" 
A blurb appears above survellience videos: "When Emperor Palpatine declared the Galactic Empire, he said that he did so to ensure 'our' security and in the name of a secure society. Five years on and what has the Empire done to stamp out crime on places such as Coruscan
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The White Ghost: IMPERIAL HOLONET BROADCAST #1
The Imperial Security Bureau has reported that they are beginning a investigation into the activities of a lightsaber-wielding vigilante stalking criminals on the lower levels of Coruscant.
The Director of the ISB said today that quote "these actions performed by this renegade will not be tolerated" in reference to the activities of the individual who the underworld has branded "The White Ghost" in reference to the supposedly ghost white skin of the individual. The DIrector also reported that they are becoming involved because first and foremost, the individual has been repeatedly interfering with the investigations of the Coruscant Security Force by deliberately destroying evidence and bringing a quote 'medieval form of justice' down on criminals. 
The Director also made it clear that the  ownership of a lightsaber, a signature weapon of the outlawed treacherous Jedi cult, is a serious crime, punishable by forced labor. The manufacture of one is also a capital crime. 
T
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The Animals of Farthing Wood review
So... 
The Animals of Farthing Wood. Where the hell do I start with this show? 
Imagine one of those creepypastas about a fucked up TV show being real and aimed at kids. 
Okay, it's not that dark, but it IS dark. Don't get me wrong. 
So what is this show about? The show follows a group of animals who retreat from their destroyed home of Farthing Wood and try to make it to White Deer Park. Once they get there, they have to fit in. This show is split off into three seasons, all of them based off books by Collin Wood. I will not be comparing the books to the TV show, because one, I haven't read them and two, the show should stand and fall on it's own two feet. 
By the way, I haven't finished Season 3 yet. 
Okay, to get this out of the way,  you might have heard about this show being violent. It is. It is very violent, but not all the episodes contain death or blood. But a lot of them do. Some of the animals are either run over, mauled to death by other a
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Kaisersturm (CHAPTER 9)
The next morning, we packed our things and kept marching. We faced no opposition as we marched to Salzburg, which was also occupied by our forces.  Once there, we were sorted into the northern division, which would take the upper half of the country. The division numbered about 10,000 troops.
 
Once we had our lunch, we set off for Linz. A few of us didn’t make it to Linz, because the rebels had set up IEDs in the roads. We lost about two pieces of artillery and about 40 men to IED explosions before we reached Linz.
 
As soon we got into range of the city, we were immediately showered with bullets and mortars. Snipers had set up their nests in every good sniper position facing our way, picking off our troops. We even engaged in hand-to-hand combat with a few rebels. They were all shouting in different languages, the same languages which caused the rebels to shoot at each other just the next day. This, and the stupendously strong defence alerted us to the fact that
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Top 10 Hypnosis Hangouts Online
Reblogged from my www.hypnofantastico.blogspot.com blog.
Sometimes I'll assume (mistakenly) that everyone I chat with and meet online is as familiar with as many hypnotic hangouts and kinky corners of the internet as I am. Fairly often though I'll meet someone who's just getting into the hypno-scene that has never heard of MCStories or is getting their hypnotic kicks by reading the "Hypnosis" section of wikipedia.



As a result, I think it's only good and proper if I compile my list of the: 
TOP TEN HYPNOTIC HANGOUTS!
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Princess Leia Hypnotized
Princess Leia Organa had been on a “diplomatic” mission. This mission was interrupted, however, when she was captured by the empire. Now she was being transported to the Death Star, treated as a captive rather than the princess of Alderaan and daughter of an important senator.
Vader had become a broken man since the Clone Wars ended, and that had given him all the more reason to expand his mind control and hypnosis abilities. He would get the information he wanted from the princess of Alderaan, no matter the cost. He entered the small room the girl was being kept in.
“Princess. I want you to make yourself comfortable. You should let your arms rest at your sides, and put your feet flat on the ground. I guarantee it would make this a pleasurable experience for you.”
Leia glared at Vader as she made sure to do the opposite of what the dark lord had just said.
“Why would I do anything you tell me to do?”
Vader smiled from behind his helmet.
“Soon y
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I am calling it right now. Once Marvel completes Secret Empire, it's going to be retconned by the Cosmic Cube. That's the only way I can see them repairing the damage that this arc is doing to the internal universe. There is no way they can go back to a normal life after overthrowing HYDRA and maintain this continuity at the same time. There's just no way. 

Many fans seem to hate Captain America turning into a HYDRA Agent.  FYI, Captain America is my favourite superhero.  I don't have a problem with it. This was a bold new step for Marvel to take, twisting one of it's core characters and turning him upside down. 

But, this doesn't feel like a regular Marvel story arc to me. This feels like that Civil War story they did in Secret Wars. It feels out of place in the regular continuity.

Just thought I'd write down my opinions on this story arc from Marvel which I'm following.  
This is hands down one of the best shows that I have ever seen.  It's interesting and mature story appeals to both children and adults.

But I shouldn't get too far ahead of myself, should I? Welcome to my review of A Long, Long Holiday 

A Long, Long Holiday is a children's miniseries from France about a group of children, two of whom are on holiday, who are trapped in their village due to the Nazi occupation of France and they are forced to grow beyond their years while they fight to defend their home. 

I found this show while scrolling through Netflix and when I read that it was about young people under Nazi occupation in France, I was immediately hooked. 

Let there be no mistake, this may look like a kid's show, but some parts of this show deal with tough subjects and people do die in this show.  Not often, but it does happen. 

I like how they tackled this WWII setting. Instead of focusing it around seasoned Resistance fighters, they focus it around a group of children who don't understand what's going on. This gives the viewer a opportunity to sympathize and bond with the characters as they try to survive. 

Speaking of the setting, I like how this show does not go for the cliche 'WWII Germans are all a evil force'. There is at least one good German and one episode deals with a German officer, who is caught by the children trafficking supplies under the guise of 'requisition''. only to be punished by his fellow German officers when he is busted. This creative decision makes the war seem more grey than black and white, which is a different route for a kids' show to take. 

Speaking of the children, I like how they make it clear these characters ARE children. They don't put them in ridiculous situations, like shooting Germans in the head or something. These children fight the German occupation through more covert means, like distributing pamphlets or keeping count of German trucks in a convoy.  They also don't base them in a sewer or in a cafe, like adult Resistance fighters. They are based in a cubbyhouse and they depict the group not as a resistance cell, but your typical kids' secret club.  

Speaking of the characters, I like how they keep the characters simple. Some are good, some are bad and some are neutral. I like how the show doesn't get caught up in it's mature topics and doesn't make the characters too complex for children to understand.

Also, I like how they can fit a mature theme like the persecution of the Jews into what is supposed to be a show for children. What do I mean?  In one episode, Collette  takes pity on a girl who is forced to wear a Jewish yellow star (a precursor to the Holocaust) by the Germans.  In the episode, they never mention that Jews are being killed, the children just complain that it is unfair.  They frame it like a typical episode about children complaining about a new rule. 

And lastly, I must compliment the animation. The CGI animation is gorgeous. It reminds me of Valiant Hearts: The Great War, one of my favourite video games of all time. The animation allows the characters to be more expressive and it can handle scenes like dogfights in the air and planes dropping bombs. 

This was my rapid fire review of a awesome show on Netflix that I highly recommend that you check out. 
A Long, Long Holiday short review
A review of my newest favourite show. Apologies if it seems a little rushed. I wanted to get this done while the show was still on my mind. 
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I've been watching a kids' show from France called A Long, Long Holiday on Netflix. Gotta give credit to the French. They know how to make a adult kids' show. 
Everyone, I have published a book on Amazon called 'A Negro Named Tom'. It is the first in a series of books set in a alternate timeline where the Confederate States of America won the American Civil War in 1861. 

It is only available on Kindle and is pretty cheap at $5.00. If you buy this book, please spread this around and if you want, leave a review. 

There will be more books, both in this series and in other series. 

www.amazon.com.au/d/Negro-Name… 

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